Question 1 :
Should exxonmobil develop stronger employment strategies to increase employee productivity?
Feedback 1: Stronger employment strategies is too vague – what strategie(s)?

Question 2:
Should exxonmobil employ motivational techniques to increase output?
Feedback 2: the motivational techniques is too vague. You need to actually put in some kind of technique that they will employ – you can link it to a motivational theorist if you wish but it needs to be more specific.